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Re: Der Liederbuch
I love you writing style, How what your poem is about is very open to interpretation but how you can tell in means something to you that I'm sure very ...
Aug 18, 2008 -
Re: My Art & Photography Gallery
I'll be adding to this, so if you like it keep you eye on it. My Paintings Added August 13, 2008 A Tainted Eternity No title You Were My Favorite ...
Aug 14, 2008 -
Re: bloody bride
Great Idea. The storys super short though, which isn't always bad, but in this case I'm left wanting to know more. I think maybe you should add detail, like what ...
Jun 19, 2008 -
Re: We Were Once Strangers
"in the maelstrom of life" I adore this line, the whole poem is great though "Life dealt us a chance card: a chance to get to know someone; touch hearts, ...
May 26, 2008 -
Re: Stubborn Lover
Thanks very much for the reviews I'm considering some of the advice I can't express how happy it made me that no ones hated it yet. Thank you again for ...
May 13, 2008 -
Re: Stubborn Lover
My stubborn lover, my mistress at heart she coaxes me on when others depart. He sings to me sweet when sorrow would sink in. Oh my dear lover, how our ...
May 13, 2008 -
Re: Rose....?
Sniffing the roses are we tif tiff? I would be the best picture ever if it wasn't for the fatty in it. Hahaha! Just kidding stink pickel, you look wonderful...you ...
May 13, 2008 -
Re: lies
I'm not a poetry know-it-all but i like the poem, the only thing that bugs me is the way the lines are broken because it destracted me from the work ...
May 13, 2008 -
Re: Child
I'm am in love with this poem. The whole poem is filled with the pleasure of sin and passion and how that very passion that feels so good can lead ...
May 13, 2008 -
Re: I'm new
I'm Shaina Johnson, I'm new to young writers, I wanted to introduce myself. Overeasy, or Tiffany showed me to this web site and I thought I'd check it out. I ...
May 13, 2008 -
Re: First Drink
I like this, it is short but its good. It paints a clear picture for the reader and I think this is a wonderful example of the fact that something ...
May 13, 2008 -
Re: City Underground
This is very intresting. I love the sun in the roots.
May 13, 2008
